The bad side of love ( final draft)

Once upon a time there was a 18 years old boy called Jim and a 17 years old girl called Sarah. That they will fall in love was clear from the first time they saw eachother. The first time where Jim dated Sarah was at a port next to a city where they are from. The city was a beautiful little town with many romantic places. But this city was also famous for the high rate of criminality. Jim and Sarah spend all their time together, every free minute. They were loving eachother more then everything else in the world so that they were looking forward to get married. Many people would have said that this is amazing but the following shows that strong love has also bad sides.

It was a Saturday morning. The sun was shining and the weather was sweet. Jim woke up and the first thing he thought about as he looked out of the window was Sarah. So he quickly grabbed a banana for breakfast and rushed to the phone to call her. They spoke with eachother and finally decided to go to the port. In their opinion the port is a magic place because their big love story began there. After the call was over Sarah and Jim put on clothes and rushed out of the houses without thinking about anything. Their parents weren't at home so that the house was empty. Half an our later the young couple met at the port and they kissed and laughed and had fun. Jim paid an ice cream for his girlfriend and they sat near the water to enjoy the sun."I think we should get married in Thailand or in California", said Jim.

"Yes, I love Thailand" answered Sarah excited. They spoke much time about their future and what they want to do together if they got married. They had lots of fun and didn't care about what other people told them to do. Sarah didn't even noticed that she got completely burned by the sun. So the day ended quickly and they went home after the sun had gone. Jim opened his door and started to cry. The whole house get robbed and there were nothing anymore. He noticed that he left the door open while he was in a hurry. The same thing happened in Sarah's house. She also left the door open. The parents came home and couldn't believe their eyes. Everything was gone, the tv the money the computers and many more things. Two families were in the same bad situation just in different places. The parents were really angry about their kids and took them away their phones so that the couple wasn't able to keep in touch for the next month. Jim and Sarah were not allowed to see eachother for a long time until they have learned to be independend and to protect their things.

This story shows that love can make you blind and shut down your concentration. People have to learn that there are many important things in life , not only the girlfriend or the boyfriend.