Letter final draft

Hey Satan, I'm Philipp and I really enjoyed seing you acting in your video. I like emotionally playing and

I was really fascinated by the video and espectially your performance. That's why I want to give you a 

feedback with this letter. I am interested in playing bad roles because I think it's more challenging then 

playing good and normal roles. I think so because it's hard to behave really like a devil and make  

people believe this in your video. This is done really successful in the video ,,Zeus and Satan". I can 

identify her really well with her role as Satan. There are many things that underline the good 

performance from satan.

First of all she speaks with a dark and bad voice so that the whole role gets transmit better. It also 

appeals stronger to the reader then without these emotional points in her voice.

She also act really emotionally like at the end where she said ,,Noooooo" because she had to go to 

prison. Because of all this emotional acting the whole role appeals better to the reader. 

I would really like to see what happened in the prison and if you get out of the prison. Would you 

change your behaviour after being in prison or not ?  

There are some aspects that I would improve in your video. First of all I would put on a red costume so that 

Your role as the Satan is even more appealing to the reader. Also I would choose another location

for Satan so that the video is more interesting and more fun to watch.

All in all I wrote this letter because I'm really impressed by the acting skills of the Satan and I enjoyed to 

watch the video. I hope this will be helpful to you.

Philipp jessen 

Letter to satan

My name is philipp and I love watching dialog videos. I saw the video satan and Zeus and I rally in enjoyed it.

The reason for my letter is that I'm a big fan from the actor of satan. I can identify her really good in the role of satan. 

She speaks with a dark and bad voice so that the character of satan gets transmitted.

She plays her role really emotional and with many expressions. Also the speaking part from satan sounds bad and unfriendly. Maybe it would be even more appealing to the reader if satan would wear some red clothes or something like this. 

Maybe you should try to be good again so that you will get out of prison after it. I hope you will be friends again with Zeus and the others and be in knowledge that what you have done was bad.

All in all you have done a good acting job and I enjoyed watching it. Keep up this great job.

Block 3

There are many things that make creativ writing interesting. Creative writing can be many kinds of writing like poems and novels , short stories and many more kinds. 

Creative writing can be interesting in different kinds. For example the phrases and the words that you have used are interesting and its amusing to read the text which is buid up with many different emotionally phrases. For example a poem would be a kind of creative writing which contains to the first kind of interesting writing that Ive explained above. Furthermore creative writing can be make interesting with a good story. If the writing is funny and amusing to read the persons are interested in this creative writing. Also a dangerous or a love story can make a person be interested in the creative writing. This is important because the emotions like love and fun are really big in our personality. Because of this ,many people feel interested in storys which are handleling with this kind of emotions. So the most important thing is that the story or the creative writing is not boring. If a writing is boring nobody wants to read or to finish this kind of writing. Everybody who is reading a boring book is not really interested in it and this is not a good thing. To prevent writing something boring you have to write your story with interesting phrases and words so that the writing gets interesting to analyse or to read. This is one possibilty to make creative writing interesting. This is really hard to do , because for writing interesting and fantastic phrases and using special words you need to have a big and good vocabular. The other possibiliy is to write the story interesting. The words and phrases can be normal but you story and all in all the text have to be funny or interesting to read. Thats why you have to think about how you can make your story funny and interesting. You have to write a good storyboard so that the attention of the reader is cought. We made our writing peace very interesting and also a kind of funny because we used a dialog where our persons first want to make buisness together and at the end argue with eachother. This makes the story interesting. We also used some funny phrases in our dialog to make the story appealing funny to the reader and also make the reader being interesting to read the rest of the story. In our dialog the two buisness men use funny  phrases to make the products from the competitor bad and let him feel bad. This is reached by using unusual words that are normally not part of a buisness conversation. With this the reader feels amused and is looking forward how the story will and and if the buisness men will do buisness or not.

All in all you have to prevent that your story is boring by using funny phrases and writing a good storyboard so that the reader is interested in the ending of the story. 

The bad side of love ( final draft)

Once upon a time there was a 18 years old boy called Jim and a 17 years old girl called Sarah. That they will fall in love was clear from the first time they saw eachother. The first time where Jim dated Sarah was at a port next to a city where they are from. The city was a beautiful little town with many romantic places. But this city was also famous for the high rate of criminality. Jim and Sarah spend all their time together, every free minute. They were loving eachother more then everything else in the world so that they were looking forward to get married. Many people would have said that this is amazing but the following shows that strong love has also bad sides.

It was a Saturday morning. The sun was shining and the weather was sweet. Jim woke up and the first thing he thought about as he looked out of the window was Sarah. So he quickly grabbed a banana for breakfast and rushed to the phone to call her. They spoke with eachother and finally decided to go to the port. In their opinion the port is a magic place because their big love story began there. After the call was over Sarah and Jim put on clothes and rushed out of the houses without thinking about anything. Their parents weren't at home so that the house was empty. Half an our later the young couple met at the port and they kissed and laughed and had fun. Jim paid an ice cream for his girlfriend and they sat near the water to enjoy the sun."I think we should get married in Thailand or in California", said Jim.

"Yes, I love Thailand" answered Sarah excited. They spoke much time about their future and what they want to do together if they got married. They had lots of fun and didn't care about what other people told them to do. Sarah didn't even noticed that she got completely burned by the sun. So the day ended quickly and they went home after the sun had gone. Jim opened his door and started to cry. The whole house get robbed and there were nothing anymore. He noticed that he left the door open while he was in a hurry. The same thing happened in Sarah's house. She also left the door open. The parents came home and couldn't believe their eyes. Everything was gone, the tv the money the computers and many more things. Two families were in the same bad situation just in different places. The parents were really angry about their kids and took them away their phones so that the couple wasn't able to keep in touch for the next month. Jim and Sarah were not allowed to see eachother for a long time until they have learned to be independend and to protect their things.

This story shows that love can make you blind and shut down your concentration. People have to learn that there are many important things in life , not only the girlfriend or the boyfriend.

In class writing

For me it was easy to find a good and interesting thesis about my chosen painting. The picture offers many ideas and colorful merges and contrast so that you have many points to write about. I think it was difficult to make the readers believe your ideas and understand the way you are thinking. Furthermore I had sometimes problems with finding the right words to express my opinion exactly and on an easy way. Another point is that the picture can be seen in many different ways so that It's difficult to let the reader see and understand only your thinking.If I had more time, I would have written more about the picture itself. I would describe the picture more detailed and form longer and better sentences. I would also find out more facts that underline my thesis. I would describe the different colors of blue better and connect them with a good interpretation.

The bad side of love

The story is about a boy and a girl who fall in love at the port. They love eachother so much that they 

just focus on themselfs and dont care about other persons and what happens in the rest of the world. 

They spend much time together and meet eachother as many times as possible. One day the young 

couple wanted to go to the port again because the weather was really nice and the sun smiled over 

the water of the port.The 18 years old boy called his girlfriend as soon as possible and rushed out of 

his house. Exactly the same happened by the 17 years old girlfriend. They met by the port and enjoyed 

every second of it. They kissed eachother and spoke about the things in life that they want to do when 

they got married. The day ends quickly and you didnt see the sun anymore. They kissed eachother 

one last time and went home. As they came home they saw that they let the door open and the whole 

house get robbed. They losed everything and had nothing anymore. They started to cry at the same 

time in different places. They realized finally that they dont care about anything and thats the reason 

why they lost everything. As the parents of the young couple came home they were really sad and 

unhappy about that their kids are so stupid and unresponsible. The couple just cared about themself 

and dont see the real world. They were blind from love. This story shows that you allways have to be 

attentive and to take care of other people and your obligations. The couple was in love so that they 

dont care about anything else anymore. They just enjoy eachother and merge everything else together. 

Many young couples act like this and this is a big danger. Even if you are in love you always have to be 

attentive and to live in the real world and not in a dream or imagination world.

Merge the Imagination with the reality (Van Gogh painting description)

This painting which was painted by Van Gogh shows a port with 2 persons an the bottom of the picture.In the background you can see a lightful city with many lights which were reflected by the water of the port.In the middle of the picture are two boots which are surrounded by water. This water is also surrounded by a lightful city. At the top of the picture you can see a sky full of stars.The blue colors of the water and the sky are mixed with the yellow colors of the lights from the city. Thats why it is difficult to see what part of the picture contains to what. But which part of the picture is the water and which the sky or the city? The painting shows that it is sometimes difficult to differ the reality from the imagination.

First of all the many different kinds of the blue color make it difficult to decide which part of the painting is the water and which part the sky or the city. In the sky is a lightful and strong blue. The water is painted with a dark blue that is combined with black. In the foreground is another kind of blue. It is a lightful and a grey blue. These different kinds of blue make it hard to decide which of them is what part of the picture.

Furthermore the merge of the colors is an important thing that you have to think about. Van Gogh is merging many kinds of blue like in the water the dark blue with some lightful parts of blue which were lighted by the yellow lights of the city. The blue is merged with some other colors like yellow and green from the ground so that it gets also more difficult to differentiate the scenes of the picture. 

Also an important fact is the way how the picture is drawn. The picture is painted with many short lines and points so that every thing is cut into pieces. This is hard to recognize and the whole picture gets hard to differentiate. 

The picture goes fluencly over the different parts of the picture so that you might think that a part of the sky is a part of the city. It also can happen that the water is seen as a part of the city because the city is reflected in the water. 

This reflection is the most important thing in the picture that make you feel puzzled and not sure about it. 

All in all there are many different things that make the picture being confusing. Its hard to recognize the different parts of the picture and you can loose your oriantation quickly in the merging colors.

Thats why I think that the painting shows that it is difficult to find the difference between the reality and the imagination.

Philipp Jessen 

Essay

  

 The right person in your life can warm up your heart. 

On the picture you can see a sidewalk in the woods, where two people are walking on. The two persons look like a couple who are walking from the background of the picture to the front. In the foreground are many warm colours like red and orange, which is going over to a cold blue and grey in the background. On the left side of the painting is a bank in a light orange color. My main these is that the right person in your life can warm up your heart. There are many reasons why this Impression gets determined.

First of all you can see that the two persons are a couple and wakling next to eachother. This is a important fact because this shows that they belong together and that they go through everything together. Only because they found eachother they can escape from the cold side and go over to the warm and attractive place in the foreground.

Another aspect is the different of the colors. The foreground ,where the couple is walking to, is colored with lightfull and 'warm' colors like red, yellow and orange. these colors are changing into a 'cold' and pallid blue and grey. This symbolizes that the couple is walking to a better place.

Also important are the contrasts in the painting.The biggest contrast in the painting is on the sidewalk between the foreground and the background. There is the color changing from a strong red to a blue. This results that each color looks stronger and emotionally.

Furthermore an object like a sidewalk stands for the way of life where you walking on till the end of your days. Thats why you can imagine that the couple is walking to a better and warmer place then before.

All in all the painting, painted by an unknown person (can not find) is very emotionally and can be interpretated in many different things.I think that the most important thing is the couple and what they can do together. Thats why I agree to my thesis statement that the right person In your life can warm up your heart. 

Thesis for essay

 

Thesis: Life can be good or bad , you have to try to live the good one.

            The right person in your life can warm up your heart.

            Find a warm place in your life.

The magic of nature!

     Nature is colorful and varied 

   In this painting you can see a little house at a see or a pond with many nature like flowers and other plants. In the middel of the picture is a pond with plants on it. Next to the pond are some flowers and much more plants in different colours. In the background of the picture is a little red house and some trees. 

The artwork is trying to express the versatility of nature. This is made clear with several aspects.

First of all the plants and flowers in the picture are all painted with different colours. This represents the variability. For example some plants are colored in purple and others in blue or green or red. Even if the colors do not match the reality the main idea that nature is different gets transmitted. 

Furthermore the contrast of the colors are also important to express the versatility of nature. In the picture are many color contrasts especially between the plants and the flower. This leads to the fact that the colors are more expressive. For example there is a contrast between the yellow and the purple flowers that increase the individual colors. 

Another point is that the plants and flowers are connected with the pond because they are growing next to it. The pound is reflecting the colors and their objects, in this case trees and plants, so that the whole picture looks more colorful and varied. 

All in all there are many aspects in the painting that make the artwork looks really colorful. Thats why I think that the painting represents the beauty and variability of the nature.

The world as a peaceful place

The painting shows a wall with four roses and other little flowers in the background. The artist ist using many lightful and warm colors. Especially the roses are coloured in a really lightful red.

When I see the painting, I feel happy and protected and exactly this is what the artist is trying to represent with his loveful painting. The painting is trying to convey that the world can be a lovely and peaceful place, that we have to protect and to enjoy in every second of our life. These emotions are mainly represented by the flowers and espectially by the roses, which are really lightful and painted in love colors. Red is the official color of love , because it warms up our heart and let us feel good. Furthermore the rose is a object, that represents love and peace. That's why the artist is using this colors and objects in his picture. Also the background is colored in a friendly and discreet brown what makes the painting comfortable. The biggest contrast in the painting is the contrast between the flowers and the background to highlight these. 

All in all the artist is trying to show the people that the world is a beautiful, lovely and peaceful place. He demonstrates this with his colorful and lightful painting. We just have to notice that.

My fantastic Collage!

I love writing. But why?There are so many things that I can say about writing. First of all I am excited about fantasy books and fiction. When you read these books you can escape from the real world and enjoy the fantasy world. This is a good way to relax and to have fun, but writing is much more then this. Sometimes I prefer to read non fictional text like the newspaper or an interesting article because I want to know what is happening in the real world where we all are living. For me this is really important because I think that you have to know what is going on in the global world and what will happen in the future. Furtheremore I love reading poems. Have you ever though about how difficult it is to write poems? Poems are not like the other kinds of writing. They express much feelings and the whole text must rhyme. It is really difficult to combine these two things. Thats why it is so difficult to write a good poem. I enjoy writing poems by myself. I see it like a big challenge and I find it interesting to find the right words for expressing my feelings. My favourite books are Erebos and Feed. Erebos is about a computer game that takes control of the people and trys to kill people. All in all when I write i get to express my feelings and my different emotions. That helps me escape from reality, I can write whatever I want with no limits and thats good because I escape my normal boring normal life. 

At my collage I used 6 pictures. The first item is a picture of one my favourites books called Erebos. My second Item shows a open book where something is coming out of. This should demonstrate my love to fiction and fantasie books. I also used a picture from a newspaper. This should show that I enjoy reading news and interesting non fiction articles for keeping me up today. My next item in the collage is the book FEED. This was a book that I had to read in the summer reading. I really enjoyed it and I was  excited from the modern technology in the book. The last two elements of the Collage are the two words ,writing, and ,poems, . Ive drawn them in my collage because I really enjoy writing, espectially writing poems. This gives me the opportunity to express my feelings and to espace from the real world.

All in all I can say that I really enjoy writing and many different kinds of it.

Philipp Jessen