In class writing

For me it was easy to find a good and interesting thesis about my chosen painting. The picture offers many ideas and colorful merges and contrast so that you have many points to write about. I think it was difficult to make the readers believe your ideas and understand the way you are thinking. Furthermore I had sometimes problems with finding the right words to express my opinion exactly and on an easy way. Another point is that the picture can be seen in many different ways so that It's difficult to let the reader see and understand only your thinking.If I had more time, I would have written more about the picture itself. I would describe the picture more detailed and form longer and better sentences. I would also find out more facts that underline my thesis. I would describe the different colors of blue better and connect them with a good interpretation.