Monday, September 22, 2014

The bad side of love

The story is about a boy and a girl who fall in love at the port. They love eachother so much that they 

just focus on themselfs and dont care about other persons and what happens in the rest of the world. 

They spend much time together and meet eachother as many times as possible. One day the young 

couple wanted to go to the port again because the weather was really nice and the sun smiled over 

the water of the port.The 18 years old boy called his girlfriend as soon as possible and rushed out of 

his house. Exactly the same happened by the 17 years old girlfriend. They met by the port and enjoyed 

every second of it. They kissed eachother and spoke about the things in life that they want to do when 

they got married. The day ends quickly and you didnt see the sun anymore. They kissed eachother 

one last time and went home. As they came home they saw that they let the door open and the whole 

house get robbed. They losed everything and had nothing anymore. They started to cry at the same 

time in different places. They realized finally that they dont care about anything and thats the reason 

why they lost everything. As the parents of the young couple came home they were really sad and 

unhappy about that their kids are so stupid and unresponsible. The couple just cared about themself 

and dont see the real world. They were blind from love. This story shows that you allways have to be 

attentive and to take care of other people and your obligations. The couple was in love so that they 

dont care about anything else anymore. They just enjoy eachother and merge everything else together. 

Many young couples act like this and this is a big danger. Even if you are in love you always have to be 

attentive and to live in the real world and not in a dream or imagination world.

1 comment:

  1. Good story! Although the blind love might not be so good, I really like the part when you describe how they loved each other. However, can you show more details about what they did after they were stolen? Did they break up or just deal with the problem together?

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