Blog#5

Small moments with a big moral!

How difficult is it to write a good story about your significiant moment and analyze it? The answer is that it´s not easy. You have to think about many details and explain them clearly. Furthermore it is really challenging to find and explain the lesson that you learned from this moment. This has to be done exactly and the reader has to be able to relate to it.
According to my oppinion the hardest part of this writing is the analyze. There are many reasons that underline this.
First of all the analyze is the part where you have to understand and realize the whole essay. You have to expain how the events in the essay have impact on your personality and what you learned from the events. This is a tough task to accomplish.
Another reason is that the analyze is the longest part of the essay, so that you have to spend much time on it and think about what you will write in it. Concentration on the details from the story is necessary to reach the length. Nontheless you still have to focus on the important things and don´t use unimportant things for your analyze.
The most important thing that makes the analyze to the most challenging part is that you have to find the moral that you have learned from the story and explain how you came up with the idea.
For example I had to find out that riscant events like the water jump improve your self confidence and independence. This can get explained by the fact that you overcome yourself and find out a new and better side of yourself.
The analyze has to make readers understand your opinion and your results that you thought about. Therefor many arguments and logical conclusions has to be used. Summarizing the analyze is the part where you have to think the most and to write logical. This is for many people and also for me a really hard work.
Another reason why the analyze is the most difficult part in an essay is because you have to understand what you are writing or what you are reading for creating the analyze. Otherwise the analyze would be wrong or not focused on the theme and the story. 
All in all a good essay has not only a good analyze but also a nice introduction, a story and a conclusion. Important is that these three parts have to fit to eachother and a fluently connection should be created. This let the reader feel confortable while reading and he can focus on the main ideas in the essay. It can be really hard to create a good connection between the different parts in an essay, but there are some things which can help. For example you can use many connectionswords like "Furthermore" and "Also".
In an good analyze you have to think about all these facts and use them correctly. That is why the analyze is the most challenging part for me and probably for many other people too.