Top 3

1. Comparison of my bottle , by Sophia

Interesting beginning and really good ideas, which are connected with the bottle.

2. A place that only welcome me, by Gordon

Good title and the descriptions are really detailed.

3.  There is a place you can not see, by Zen

Really good story with interesting ideas and much fantasy. Maybe a better Title would be good.

Review

I chose the desk in my room where I am doing my homework. It is a small desk with much free place to leave stuff on it. On the first look, the desk is not very modern, but still looks new and in a good use. Next to me is my laptop, which color is black. The laptop is from "Lenovo" and has a "NVIDIA" graphic card. The Laptop´s size is normal and the keyboard feels smooth and comfortable.
On the corner of my desk is my desk lamp. It has a round ground and its color is black too. The lamp is covered with a bit dust and feels rough. Additionally the lamp looks like a small black egg that is standing in the corner of a desk. The lamp looks really modern and fits to the area around the desk. Besides the lamp is really thin and it does not look to hard to break.  
To my left and to my right there are books and papers. The one book is a biology book and the other book is the English book. Both of them are really big and heavy. When you look at the pages of the books from the side, you can see hundred of pages. The papers are written with pencil and feel rough and kinked. The books are big and colorful. The biology book is really orange and all in all colorful. Also the English book has a strong blue color. One of them smells really fresh and printed, and some of them smell like old paper with a touch of printing ink. Their paper feel smooth, but rough when you feel at them exactly. The biology book has many pictures inside and this is underlining the fact that it is really colorful. On the contrary the English book has no pictures inside and there are many pages written full with normal letters.
The whole desk is made out of wood. It feels very comfortable and interesting. Every part of the wood feels different with different notches. It looks like a big pattern with many different forms. You can feel the structure of the wood and the papers in detail. There is a drawer coming out of the desk when you pull it. It is wooden too. The drawer is located at the bottom part of the desk. Furthermore a pencil is at the desk. The color of the pencil is yellow and you can feel the strong grip. The mine is dull and worn.
In front of me is my room key. The room key feels cold and it is not comfortable to hold for a long time. Its lanyard is a blue rope with two black connectors at the top. It is the key that lets you in the dorm. The color of the key itself is dull gold. It feels cold, not malleable, and sharp. All in all I noticed that my desk is really messy and I should rather clean it before I go on with my homework.

Food

I ate Italian food over the break. I had pasta with pesto. The pasta smelled really fresh and tasted like a big combination of herbs. The kind of pasta were gnocchi. They were cooked good and for a long time. As they served the pasta, it was really hot and steam came up. It smelled like fresh noodles together with the light green pesto sauce. The pesto sauce looked really good, and because of the strong green color, it was clear that the sauce is fresh. The pasta with the sauce tasted really fresh and strong. You could taste the fresh basil and parsley and also the really good olive oil. The consistence of the pasta was really comfortable, because it wasn't to hard or to soft. Also the Parmesan was really tasty, and it had a strong aroma. All in all I had a great dinner during thanksgiving break. 

4. One thing

A small eraser with a strong effect

I choose my eraser for observing. The peace of plastic is a small eraser, which is round and looks really clean. Its size is only two inches long. The color of the eraser is white and bright. Sometimes you can see some black lines from a pencil on the eraser. When you look at the eraser exactly, you can see little small holes all over the eraser. With some creativity the white oval looks like a little white sponge. The eraser looks like a small harmless sponge that is taken away from a different place. The color, the shape and the smell doesn't fit in a school equipment, because in there are pencils, made out of wood, a pen, made out of steal, and a ruler, which made out of wood or steal too. The eraser looks like the little spong, who get lost in the big equipment for school. Some of these holes are filled with color of the pencil. The eraser smells like plastic, but it is not a strong smell. It smells soft and neutral. When you touch the eraser, you can feel that its surface is really smooth and soft. Also, the eraser is very stretchy and flexible. You can stretch the sponge really long until it starts to break. There is not a big different between the top of the eraser and the bottom of the eraser, because the shape of the eraser is the same. The only different that you can observe is that the top is a bit dirty with pencil color. The bottom of the eraser is really clean and you can not see any color on the eraser. Also the little holes in the eraser are not filled with any color. You can imagine that the top of the eraser protects the bottom of the eraser of dangerous pencil color, so that only the top side gets dirty. All these ideas show that only your imagination and creativity can make even small and boring things like erasers really interesting and emotional. The white color or the eraser let you feel hopeful and strong. This white color is really rare in school bag. It represents hope, fun and light. The erasers job is to erase things, however he is symnolized with the strongest and most emotional color. Also the smell is very comfortable and neutral. Even if the eraser erased many of different colors, it still smells the same and you still believe that it is new and not used. Finally the eraser is a really special tool, because he gets really small after a long period if time, but still smells new and fresh.

All in all the eraser is small and round with a bright white color. It smells neutral with a touch of plastic and it feels soft and really smooth. Additionally you can say that the eraser looks like a little white sponge with many little holes, where some of them are filled with pencil color and some of them are not. 

7. Final Draft

I chose the desk in my room where I am doing my homework. Next to me is my Laptop, which color is black. The Laptop´s size is normal and the keyboard feels smooth and comfortable.
On the corner of my desk is my desk lamp. It has a round ground and its color is black too. The lamp is covered with a bit dust and feels rough.
To my left and to my right there are books and papers. The papers are written with pencil and feel rough and kinked. The books are big and colorful. One of them smells really fresh and printed, and some of them smell like old paper with a touch of printing ink. Their paper feel smooth, but rough when you feel at them exactly.
The whole desk is made out of wood. It feels very comfortable and interesting. Every part of the wood feels different with different notches. It looks like a big pattern with many different forms. You can feel the structure of the wood and the papers in detail.
Furthermore a pencil is at the desk. The color of the pencil is yellow and you can feel the strong grip. The mine is dull and worn.
In front of my room key. His lanyard is a blue rope with two black connectors at the top. The color of the key itself is dull gold. It feels cold, not malleable, and sharp. All in all I noticed that my desk is really messy.

7. Right Where You Are Sitting

I chose the desk in my room where I am doing my homework. Next to me is my Laptop, which color is black. The Laptop´s size is normal and the keyboard feels smooth and comfortable. On the corner of my desk is my desk lamp. It has a round ground and its color is black too. The lamp is covered with a bit dust and feels rough. To my left and to my right there are books and papers. The papers are written with pencil and feel rough and kinked. The books are big and colorful. One of them smells really fresh and printed, and some of them smell like old paper with a touch of printing ink. Their paper feel smooth, but rough when you feel at them exactly. The whole desk is made out of wood. It feels very comfortable and interesting. Every part of the wood feels different with different notches. It looks like a big pattern with many different forms. You can feel the structure of the wood and the papers in detail. Furthermore a pencil is at the desk. The color of the pencil is yellow and you can feel the strong grip. The mine is dull and worn. In front of my room key. His lanyard is a blue rope with two black connectors at the top. The color of the key itself is dull gold. It feels cold, not malleable, and sharp. All in all I noticed that my desk is really messy.

Describing

Golden line 

silver ring 

Shiny 

Round 

Silver clip 

Top is silver 

Small little points on golden colour 

Light is broken to many different directions

Cap looks dark not shiny 

Silver line reflects myself like a mirror 

A logo is on the left in white colour, hard to see, because do the golden colour 

The Logo says E*LV 

The white logo looks dark and not shiny 

Silver clip is reflecting myself

Round like a pen 

Feels supple but when you feel it slowly it is rough 

Silver clip is smoothly 

The stylus looks like a golden pen with a shiny lightful golden colour, which make it hard to see the small white logo. It feels really smoothly but when you feel it slowly it is getting rough. The silver clip and the silver ring are shining and reflecting myself like a mirror.